Mister Wolf!!!!!!!!

Hi everyone, this week we did narrative writing. I like writing. I wrote about a wolf who is trying to save his family form hunters. He found some friends and they helped him get his family out of the place. this story might take a long time to read it so I hope you like my story. The wolf goes around the jungall to get his family the main character is the wolf,baboon and the bird. What do you think about my story? I'd love some feedback.



One dark dark Knight It was a group of wolves. Going through the jungle and then a whole bunch of bed people came and shot them with a gun that put them to sleep. But only one Wolf don't get put to sleep Was only a baby wolf he hid in the bushes so that the hunters couldn't get him. All of the other wolves got  talking away and the. Little wolf was sad and he was wondering when they would come back but they never came back. So the Started his journey he was looking for all the wolves he came across all sorts of animals like tigers and lions. He went so far he seen elephants he found a big big house he thought it was too scary so we didn't go near it What guards standing outside of it. He wondered if there was his wolf pack were in the're He didn't want to go in there yet he went back into the jungle and he found some friends. A baboon and a bird that was really strong it looks like a dinosaur he asks them what is inside that big tower and they said that's where they keep all sorts of animals. And then one of them said they bought a whole bunch of wolves last week he said I need to get them out of there they're part of my family or you help me. All of them said yes but you're going to need some gear if you going there let's get you some Warden armour ok the baboon said let's get some gear. Yelled out what woodpeckers We need some wood and we make it gear for please please. An hour later all the gear was made and then the baboons said try it on  the bird said we can't go in there we all need gear ok the woodpeckers will get us them. Baboon  and the bird said if you go in there you need some rest in the morning they were practicing to get there. Went up to the guards and faked that he had a sore leg so the man took him in the big building. The other animals snuck in they had to go to the top floor to get  the animals they got all the guards down and they went to every single floor. On evesingall floor there are guards they finally got to the top floor All sorts animals and there were a lot of guards. They had trouble getting the guards down The wolf looking everywhere for their family The family was all the way the cengage. Had to go back and get the keys the wolf did and it took him a long time because there was a lot of guards there he finally got to the top after an hour. Unlock the cage and then he took them back down stairs Back into the jungle and they If it got taken away again because they would always escape.