There's a creature in my writing!!!

This week we have done a 45 minute writing. It was about a dream giver. I have made a long story for you. We made a dream giver that gives good dreams to People not bad ones. So I will show you the story.

First we went to google drawing and we made a creacher that snuck in through the window in the night. This is my creature. I made it based on the ghost off harry potter movie.

Next we watched a video and we found out about the real dream giver. He was wearing swimming goggles and he had four wings, he had a sack full of eggs and cracked them on the things we liked.   

                                                 This is my story based on the video.

 As I fell drifted asleep like a bear that is tired. Then a beast came in and gave me a dream he cracked a ega on my ps4 and then I got sukt up into. Paortall I notest that I was in a video game I was standing still and then I started dancing I realized I was a banana. I was in fortnite I screamed I was in a game and I did not want to diy so I sat in a bosh I and I won the game. I won the game that I played  I played a lot of gams and I won all of them and then I got put into a racing car game as I past the first person. I smelt smoke coming from me enjin Icloud feel the steering wheel and the gear stick I shoved it. Ford and I was going so fast I could not smalea the smoke I got down to the finish line and I drifted on the finish line. I jumped out of the car as it blew up with a bang.

I nearly fell down the hill but the people helplt me.Back up and I went to a different game and it was roblox and I did not do much. I played jaly brack I escaped and got money.And a new car that I could ride in I robbed a lot of banks then I slowly  woke up and looked around and I heard a.Buzzing sound and hid under the covers and I peakt out and the window was open and shut it and opened back into my bed.

I hope you liked my blog post. Have you seen the Dreamcatcher video? What is your favourite dream you've had? I can't wait to read your comments.