Hi we are all back at school and it is a bit hard I feel sad because it is not much fun I liked staying at home. We have to clean our computer every day and wash our hands 6 times a day
I like how you have told us all how you feel about coming back to school! I can imagine that a lot of people can relate. I also liked staying at home. It let us do a lot of things in the garden!
It's good to know that you will finish this post soon. Because I really want to know what you are working on! And since you still haven't finished your DLO, I'll give you a few tips on the writing. First, use punctuation. At the very least, try to use full stops. Just so we know where you finish a sentence, and when you start one. After that, you could read the writing again and figure out where you might need commas!
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Hi Lucas, It's me, Hana! Your post police buddy!
ReplyDeleteI like how you have told us all how you feel about coming back to school! I can imagine that a lot of people can relate. I also liked staying at home. It let us do a lot of things in the garden!
It's good to know that you will finish this post soon. Because I really want to know what you are working on! And since you still haven't finished your DLO, I'll give you a few tips on the writing. First, use punctuation. At the very least, try to use full stops. Just so we know where you finish a sentence, and when you start one. After that, you could read the writing again and figure out where you might need commas!
I hope you finish your DLO soon!
- Hana (゚ヮ゚)
(Oh yeah, and you spelled the word "feel" wrong!)
Delete... And when I said use full stops, I mean at the END of that end sentence ;-;
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