Hi this week at home I read a book called diary of the wimpy kid it is a good book do you like reading books?. This story is about when he goes to school he get bullied by a big kid the person who wrote it was Jeff Kinney if you have read this story do you like it and was it fun to read. Here is some facts off the internet Diary of a Wimpy Kid author Jeff Kinney didn't grow up wanting to be a children's author. His dream was to become a newspaper cartoonist, but he wasn't able to get his comic strips syndicated. In 1998 Jeff came up with the idea for Diary of a Wimpy Kid, a story about a middle-school weakling named Greg Heffley.
Hey Lucas, it's me Parwin!
ReplyDeleteI like the fact that you have included some things about the book and you have said what the story is about but you haven't given anything away. It's also great to see that you put lot's of effort into it by finding out some more information about the author to add to it.
This reminds me of when I read that book many years ago but I can still remember it and that was one my first Diary of a wimpy kid book that I read and I am still reading the other books as well. The last diary of a wimpy kid book that I read was probably 'The Getaway'. Have you read that book? It's an awesome story!
I think that to improve, you could present in a more eye catchy way because at the moment, you have only just written it down. And maybe you could just read through and check for errors because you had some spelling errors in there.
Awesome work!
Looking forward to your next posts,
Parwin
Thank you for the comment it is really long and tuthfull.
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