Friday 23 November 2018
the rich man called bill
This week we have been writing stories using our made up characters. I hope you like mine.
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Hi lucas it's Nikoli from Rimu class, I love your story about bill it was funny to read, maybe next time you could make the pictures more interesting to look at and maybe not add in you last name on the front page but apart from that great story.
ReplyDeleteHi lucas it's louis from rimu. I liked you createive pictures. also i liked it because there was a lot of words. Can't wait to see your next post Bye!.
ReplyDeleteHi Lucas its Renae, I love how it is funny but next time can you make the sentence's make more sense. I want to know how did bill get so rich
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Hey Lucas I like your writing. Next time try and use more full stops. All I had to say bill is to to rich
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