Wednesday 3 June 2020
This is a story that I am going to read it is cald to Trap a Thief by Des hunt I think it might be a going to trap a thief and he rides a bike
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Hi Lucas! It's me, Hana! Your post police buddy!
ReplyDeleteCool Lucas, I see that you have posted about your USSR book! The book sounds interesting! I'm assuming that you mean that the guy in the cover of the book traps a thief, and rides off on a bike as what happens in the story. Have you not read it yet? Or are you just at the very beginning, so you don't fully know what it's about. Well, It's probably about trapping a thief, but still, I want more detail.
For some reason, this reminds me of the time I hogtied someone with a bounty in Red Dead Redemption. It was quite fun, and you get more money from catching the bounty alive rather than dead. It's funny when you put them on the back of the horse tied up. Especially when you ride really fast with him on the horse's back. -_-
To improve, you could give more detail to your summary. Read the small blurb of the story on the back of the book, if you have one. They normally do, so have a look! And if there is a blurb, add it to the writing on top of your blog post, or add more to your slideshow! Also, you forgot to add a title! I was wondering why your blog post didn't have a title when I clicked on your name!
Keep up the good work!
-Hana