This week we wrote a letter to review somewhere we visited in the holidays.
42 Amuri Ave,
Hanmer Springs,
State Highway 73
17/10/18
Dear Hanmer Springs
I like the hydro slides because they are fast, especially the Super Bowl.
I loved the Lazy River. It was so hard to get out of it.
I loved the hot pools because they are so warm.
I loved the waterfall in the kids pool.
I also loved the Tuatara slide but some rocks were fake.
My favourite thing was the water park because there were all sorts of slides.
I also liked the kid's pool because there was a waterfall.
I loved the Lazy River. It was so hard to get out of it.
I loved the hot pools because they are so warm.
I loved the waterfall in the kids pool.
I also loved the Tuatara slide but some rocks were fake.
My favourite thing was the water park because there were all sorts of slides.
I also liked the kid's pool because there was a waterfall.
I was so sad that I could not go in the adult pool.
You should update the changing rooms because people can see under the door.
and you could put a heater in the changing rooms.
You should update the changing rooms because people can see under the door.
and you could put a heater in the changing rooms.
From Lucas.
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